Comments : Promises

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Nominating this<3

    Love this.
    You know i feel this exact way.

    The feeling of not knowing whether or not he still feels the same & not wanting to break the promise.
    Amazing poem<<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    An excellent piece. You penned confusion with emotions. The flow was perfect, the reader has no problem following .Good work Lil Fairy

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Yes indeed. A poem that carries the reader's emotions with it. Nice work, your Prince charming will arrive some day soon. Well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    This is one outstanding poem, I re-read this poem many times, for it projects feeling and the need of communication in a relationship. I loved it :0)

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    I think this piece conveys so much purity, rawness, and most of all, the tempo was moving.

    At the first read, I discovered something: It sounds like a Lady G song... lol, I don't know why. This is honest.. I really felt it.

    Amazing job Kristian.
    Great one.

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    I know how this feels and it's so relatable.
    wow, good poem :) I love the structure and flow 5/5 !