Comments : The Blue Moon

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Amazing <3

    The girl scared to try so she hides in the dark. you can see this in your mind. amazing emotion & it flowed great:)

    Awesome Girl(:<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Awesome!! What a title and what a ending.

    The moon hides behind
    the darkness of the night,
    the stars behind the clouds,
    and in this darkness comes
    belonging and she will survive
    and will brightly shine
    all through the night.

    Just the thought that one has resolute determination to outshine the blues (meloncholia reflected as the blue moon) is a beautiful thought in itself!

  • 12 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    Sorry, i was looking through your poems, and this one caught my attention.

    I loved the stanzas, and how they intertwined, but made sense.
    i loved it!