Holly, this touched me deeply...

Girl i can't explain how much i love this poem and how much i care
it was a good write and a good read
it was wonderful and lovely though a lil sad and a lil happy at the same time
I WISH I COULD SAY MORE :/
i love u girl 5/5

Wow. The description and the imagery are terrific. The flow and the story mean a lot to anyone who has lost their mother. Emotion is excellent and the word choice is to thank.

If you did really lose your mother, I am sorry.

This is so sAd :(
touching <3

A very touching sad poem. I can only imagine from the yearning and the expressions, that this must have been a sad loss.

I love you hunny... You are so strong. Your mom would be so proud of you, don't ever forget that <3

Thank you<3
Love you too!

Excellent, this poem brings tears to my eyes it makes me think of my grandma that died. I love how you express what you feel and not trying to hold back.

This is awsome...ur a great writter

This is awsome...ur a great writter

My mom passed away a couple years ago so i absolutely loved this poem...i wish i could have a dream like this...so i can see my mom again even if it is only for a little while.
RIP Mom. <3

Omg

Where can I start this poem had tears running down my face.. I loved it

It's 5/5 for me