Oh Raj, I'm not sure why but I got chills reading this . I think it was intense, vivid and maybe evoke more saddest then most sad poems.
An excellent job and a sure nomination..

The image of a woman clutching that photograph, sleeping on the cold marble floor is heartbreaking. Memories make us do strange things and have regrets for the things we have lost, the way things were. Well done.

That was a beautifully written poem, you created some wonderful images in my mind! 5/5

mandy :)

That was a beautifully written poem, you created some wonderful images in my mind! 5/5

mandy :)

The end as Sylvia said..clutching the photo and lying on the cold marble is heart breaking. The images here is so vivid like watching a sceve from a movie..take care.

That was really cold, I like how can you easily paint a whole new atmosphere in your poems. You have the gift, it seems to me, of combining two things: simplicity and complexity. Your style is so very at ease, but your images are somehow provoking to grasp instantly. Wow, I'm willing to read more of you, Great.