Comments : Like the Spring Wind

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Randy I could feel the wind with each line I read. Made me love it even more than I do. Glad you found this and posted.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    What beautiful images Randy, there is nothing like nature, mixed with emotion..I loved it ..

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Nice one Randy it must have fermented perfectly in the truck of your car lol..Seriously an exceptional write

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    I will agree with everyone, exceptionally beautiful. Search more places, there are some more ravishing pieces hidden somewhere.

    Such vividity of emotions like lungs being filled with pure pulsating oxygen. A fresh breath of air , leaving the reader with a smile all day long.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    "May her kiss forever free me from the bond's of yesterday's prison"

    I just love that line for it says alot! It is like having that one person who can ease, heal and set us free with their presence and nothing else. Enjoyed the read :)