Aww what a lovely poem! I really loved the story you expressed, with really nice choice of words. I was a bit confused when you said it was your father's wife, but then when I read you dedicated it to your mother, I thought that was very sweet. It was a spin off the title "my first love" because obviously the love for your mother is different than the love for another person. Well done :)

Aww this is a really sweet poem, really creative well-done :)

Aw that's sweet for ur mom :) and a great poem I loved reading it and always enjoy doing so :) I loved the wording as well :)

Awww i loved it

Subtle and sweet! you have a genuine nack for unexpected endings!Great Poem!!

I loved this poem!!!!
5/5 !! No dought!

Very creative and great choice of words..great work

If I were to quote my favorite line then it would be the whole poem.
Loved the creativity,flow and everthing to do with it.
Amazing.

If I were to quote my favorite line then it would be the whole poem.
Loved the creativity,flow and everthing to do with it.
Amazing.