Comments : My last words

  • 12 years ago

    by Georgia

    This so sad, it brought tears to my eyes. Good structure and wording. Good job and stay strong ok ?

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I love this sad poem ur getting better and I loved it it's probably the best other than ur recent love poem,,,ur a great friend I'd hate to lose,,, great poem 10/10
    My favorite stanza:

    you may say I wasn't strong
    but others might say I was string for to long
    I've been fighting these feelings but I can't no longer

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is absolutely amazing :) i really loved it babe :D you dont so good and there was so much feeling, i started crying :(
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is absolutely amazing :) i really loved it babe :D you dont so good and there was so much feeling, i started crying :(
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Harmony

    This poem is very sad :( <(^-^<) here is a hug to make you feel better

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    Aww i love this.... keep your head up.. 5/5