But it seems that
you've lost yourself
in the crowd, just
before I got the
chance to say
-Goodbye.

^ This is more than perfect.

I can picture this in my mind... Crowded airport/train-station.... He disappeared between them.. and your hands are longing for him.. But you can't reach him..

I can be cinematic also :)

Yes. I love movies and direction.

The feeling you penned is pure sadness. To never say goodbye, to never gain the final moment can stay with a person forever. Well said

The last word is the same few days ago i wrote a poem it was a sad aswel. i like one thing about your poems that they are all so simple and easy for me to understand... good work here

But it seems that
you've lost yourself
in the crowd, just
before I got the
chance to say
-Goodbye.
-Love this(:

Beautiful poem... Just wanting to be with him one last time. & Never getting a chance too.
Penned perfect with sadness<3
5/5

You promised me
one last dance,
one last time for
me to lose myself
in your arms.

I LOVE IT!!! The whole poem was amazing!! I can relate to these lines ^ And it brought me back to a past relationship!! GOOD WORK my friend!! Keep it up! :)

But it seems that
you've lost yourself
in the crowd, just
before I got the
chance to say
-Goodbye.

^

This happened to me two years ago, and he was my first love, ohh. I'm now much stronger and more imature, yet everytime I remember his face, I shiver...
thanks for this poem, girlie. ;)

Powerfully worded i could really relate to this. good job

This was so sad! :( but it was also very powerful and beautiful in its own way.

"But it seems that
you've lost yourself
in the crowd, just
before I got the
chance to say
-Goodbye."

^
For me the above was the best part of the poem

5/5

Oh my gosh this poem is so freaking amazing!!! The emotion is present and empowering. I absolutely love love love this piece. You have done an excellent job. The beginning is terrific and the end is perfect.

This is a good simple poem I loved it 5/5

U always make me smile :) good job