Love this<3

Taking time for yourself before you fade away completely.
Amazing Job(:
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Amazing reflection

I love this part :0)

Time to hold
my best friends close
for they see what I cannot see
they are the rainbows
to my blue days
and helping me
through the tough times

you can make a feeling into such action in words

your writing in this is superior and very enhanced

5/5

Yeh. its inspiring indeed we should enjoy the life and get over old aching memories. i loved this poem.

This is a great poem, and ur a great poet:)

Smile through the rain
keep my head held high
and find the things I enjoy in life

^^^
u should get over ur pain live life happily, with the ones u love:)
Ofc a 5/5 from me:)

Cant choose any fav line..the whole poem is so strng, expres d emotions wel, and tel us to stand and smile through d pain..

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A beautiful write yet also kind of sad!

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Very nice write. Sometimes we need to sit back and meditate on things to help us. And this poem described that really well. Nice write. :)

Dreams do fade, but again some are supposed to, so we may make place for new one's. Sad, but I see a ray of light emerging from the loss.

Dreams are often replaced with better ones that grow and last a life time.
Your poem said so much, with great flow and rhyme. Have faith life is a blessing, and a joy embrace what you have, forget what you don't.
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