Awww I love this poem I dont have kids but it made me cry like a little baby.

Fabulous, It kept me reading, the title took my attention and I loved the ending.

She stands next to me,
With her hands clenching the
Fabric of my blue jeans
She stares up at me with
This large grin,
That amidst all my tears,
Amidst all the pain inside,
I look down upon her
The question, I see in those eyes
But the in language she would need to ask,
She does not yet know.

^ I just love your words in here... and the images.. so tender, mind-provoking and in plus, they make one tear instantly.

I loved your message in here, but honestly, at places it felt too wordy. Maybe minimize your thoughts... make it simpler. It wouldn't be a little off, that way.

Other than that, I really like this.
It touched me deeply.

HIGH FIVE.

I loved this, I have 4 nephews, and all of them give me a reason to smile when the day is tough,

I loved the imagery, the words were strong and well incorporated, I agree that the flow seemed a little off due to the complexness of some wording but you did a lovely job
and like Abed above said,
It touched my heart, I felt it...

Love
Tara

Wow ..uor best i read so far..so.so.so..touching.

5/5..

You have so much passion, and deep seeded emotions in each word. It screams to be read and it reads smoothly without flaws. I had to read it again to absorb every word. Excellent write .

This is a definite Favorite of mine. As a parent of a girl not much older. I can really relate... so of course 5/5 :)

I really enjoyed reading this poem,

You express things so well that it doesn't take a lot to see how much you care about your Little Hero

Children are amazing! You feel so much for them so you end up expressing in words so much as well. I think it's lovely!

I hope God blesses me with a child one day so I can be inspired to write a poem like this by my flesh and blood.

Well written

x

A beautiful souvenir for your little angel. A heroic note d@ drove me thinking! Well done! Thank u 4 shar'n..

Greetings.

Another well penned poem.

I want to start by saying this line is so wonderful.

Something so minuscule
Hiding a universe of emotions

The emotion and contradiction of Minuscule-Universe for me gave the whole meaning to this poem. Good job. Keep writing.

I wont saying anything anymore about the flow and others. I found no errors.

Keep it up
Another 5 for me