I don't like a lot of cutting poems because so few people can really convey what it is like to actually be someone who self-harms but I have to be honest I liked your poem alot. You seemed to be venting a little which I liked as it give the poem a layer of emotion

5/5

Not ur best I must say,,,I wish the best for you and much happiness

Sad poem, but it's good.

This poem will speak to many people, you write very exactly poems