Wow. This is so amazing, I absolutely think you have done an excellent job. Description and emotion are abound. Terrific as usually seems to be

Amazing awesome and plain out wonderful I looved it a great poem,,,I loved what you did and wow another best I have read from you,,,fantastic job :) 5/5

:) well there is nothing else to say for the others have said it all..keep penning!

I love it, its great:) a 5/5 from me:) have a nice day:)

I love this poemx

Terrific piece, emotion is abound and so is the extremely well used description. Super job. 5/5

I love, love, love this one. SO beautiful. Your word useage is awesome. :) By far one of my favorites.