Comments : Inhale .. Exhale

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Then you whisper in my
    ears "Thats how love
    speaks in the language
    of life". It simply leaves
    you breathless !
    -This made me smile :). Shows the love<3

    Love love love this poem.
    You can tell its from the heart & that its pure meaning :).

    Amazing Job<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Boy

    This poem has a very good flow of words. and easy to understand.. and an example of cute love. great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    And indeed, you left me breathless Meme.

    I like how smooth, yet vivid your images were.

  • 12 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Funny how each poem has a different way of describing love. I think this was one of realism, it does leave you gasping for air, the last emotional breath. Great flow, read easy, smoothly..Excellent

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Yes, sooo true, it leaves you breathless. :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    WOW!!! I loved this poem so much!!!! Good work!!! :) This brought tears to my heart from how sweet it was!!! :) I'm still smiling!!! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Wauh thats good