Another beautiful poem ,kristian..
Ful points..

"oh you take my breath away"
is exactly what you did with this poem

i love how the flow changes and you did it so well too!
such a beautiful piece
the rhyming was in my eyes, flawless
wouldnt change a thing

5/5 from me
keep it up!

Wow

amazing beautiful poem from an amazing lady

1000/1000 if I could :0)

Every line and stanza just flows perfectly

Oh wow, this is amazing. Its beautiful, the wording is great and it flows perfectly. Really well done !!!!

This was a great poem. You captured the readers attention with the first line.

Excellent

5/5

Imagery is really in-depth and amazingly descriptive. The words evolving into metaphors and very strong flowing sentence are the key to this piece. Enjoyed the read, it was different and unique. 5/5

Another nice work. I really enjoy reading your stuff. You consistantly put out good poetry. The vampire romance is bit overdone but you had a nice take on it.

I quite enjoyed reading this :) Made such vivid images form in my mind, very wonderfully done. I always love when I can be transported to the word of the poem :) *but then who wouldn't want to be transformed to a vampires world?*
Wonderfully done,
5/5

Amazing, your imagery is amazing. 5/5 GREAT WRITE. Please keep up your wonderful work.

Amazing, your imagery is amazing. 5/5 GREAT WRITE. Please keep up your wonderful work.