Honestly speaking, the first two stanzas has some grammatical errors
and when reading them, it sounds a bit off...

They're also not structured tightly!!

B U T

The 3rd and 4th stanzas are so very good and written with rawness.. I loved them best.

Great expressions of painful love.

PEace.

Amazing<3

The love you feel for her is overwhelming. Just wanting her to open her eyes & see who she has standing right infront of her.

How can you say he loves you?
When making you cry is all he can do
When you ask does he love you he always says no
Why cant you just see he using you please just let him go
-The intensity of how much you care pours out this. Pleading & begging for her to just open her eyes.

Another brilliant piece :)
5/5

I feel this is a heartfelt poem well written

I love you more then this poem will ever say
If he loves so much then why did he betray
You thought he was sweet, honest and kind
why cant you see he's controlling your mind

I love this one, gret job as usual :) 5/5

Love is blind... or the girl might be scared to leave the boyfriend for fear of him hurting her even worse... I've seen girls stay with men who just beat the living shit out of them for the fun of it, and they stay just because they also think they don't deserve anything better. It's a sad, horrible situation that I wouldn't wish upon anyone.

Great job. 5/5

I call this co dependancy not feeling complete unless someone in our lives.
Love should not make us cry or feeling sad
it is all about mutual respect and honesty
anything else is all about power and control
crashing someones self esteem
we need and want more and deserve so so
much better. It does huert but there comes
a time we have to put our own happiness
first and let the other person go
5/5

This is written so well!
Definitely puts the situation into perspective.
5/5

This is written so well!
Definitely puts the situation into perspective.
5/5