Comments : The perfect girl?

  • 19 years ago

    by twisted faith

    hiya
    this poem should mean alot to so many girls AND boys, but i dont think many ppl will take the meaning to heart, but neway is a gr8 poem with a brlliant meaning behind it

  • 19 years ago

    by Concealing Words

    that is a really good poem. the words you chose were perfect and they flowed beautifully. I wish the best for your sister. Everything you said is true, there are so many people with two identities, so many people think that only good looks make you happy. keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Angela

    I know how she feels, it kills you slowly, but she can overcome it.
    angelamariecox@hotmail.com
    If she ever wants to talk.
    I love poems and your you can truelly call an excellent poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by yup

    Wow what a powerful poem. It shows a strong message, about this issue. My aunt had anorexia so I know what it is like to have it in the family. I hope your sister is doing ok and that she can overcome this.
    Take care,

    ~Kelly

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

    hey your poem really touched me coz i know how dat gurl feelZ... and i hope ur sister is well also. keep up writting and i hope to read more!!
    love StephyG

  • 19 years ago

    by Marta

    Your poem was very beautiful. I'm also anorexic and am getting help. Your poem has been an inspiration to me, and I wanted to thank you for writing it. It was moving and sends a very meaningful message out there to young girls like me. There is help, I know now. Once again, thank you very much for writing such a beautiful piece of poetry! I'll hang it up somewhere in my room for comfort and to know there's a way out from such a horrible disease. Keep it up, :).

  • 19 years ago

    by The Plain Truth

    This was a wonderful poem. The end comment that you made meant a lot, and it's oh so true. Stay strong girl, try and help your sister through it.

    Megan §

  • 19 years ago

    by lanie luvs u x3

    this is a great poem! i really liked it. keep writing! lonelyANDunloved

  • 18 years ago

    by lonelynow

    I just wanna thank you for writing this. it meant alot to me. thankyou.

    xxx