Wow a wonderful poem I may have figured out the emotions but I'm not sure,,,a terrific great poem a greatly magnificent written poem with awesome wording as well 5/5

My favorite stanza though the entire poem was great

Walking along a forest path not yet wearily
I think I'm sure I know this path, my
footfalls eerily. What's clear
to hear but still unseen. Hidden in high and
lofty tree. A lonely cry thru
quaking leaves floating in golden sea
Black bird, black bird, do you caw for me?

Thanks, Innocent...

The poem is about mentally instability, which is represented by the black bird. The forest is representitive of any place. Some start out life with a sound mental state and knowingly, uwilling and slowly go 'crazy' over the years. The forest seems familiar at times and foreign at others...depending on the level of delusion one may suffer. Though one might fight the inevitible, eventually, the crow comes calling.

-zach

Great metaphors bro, this was a very realistic and chilling write. Keep it up enjoy your work

It was chilling :)

And the metaphor of the black bird representing some 'issue's was really in the right place and it kind of provoked my thoughts.

Great job :)

I don't know how I missed this one. You did a great job with the metaphors, really great. Some are so hard to figure out while your's were creative but understandable. Awesome
Connie

This was dark, it chilled me to the bone. the repetition gave it a haunting touch. I could somehow see your loneliness through your words.

Well done,

5/5 Ingrid

Loved the first stanza. This poem conjured up many beautiful images in my mind, wonderfully done! 5/5

mandy :)

A cold dark feeling is created in this poem where a mind is lost in darkness uncertain where it is heading. Each stanza has a vivid image..excellent!

Oh I really love this piece..... very nice ~

Wow i absolutly loved it amazing job! 5/5 from me and if u need to talk im here :))

Wow awesme i love dark poems but m nt able to write, let see when i'll write. but dis poem inspired me 5/5 good job

Love this piece, an excellent work done:=)
keep writing",

"Walking along a forest path not yet wearily
I think I'm sure I know this path, my
footfalls eerily. What's clear
to hear but still unseen. Hidden in high and
lofty tree. A lonely cry thru
quaking leaves floating in golden sea
Black bird, black bird, do you caw for me?"
The beginning is very out there and kind of dark I like it.

"Laughter fills this leafy path, this forest I
surely know. I fear, I fear, I fear
the call. Do you hear the crow? I pick my
pace to fight the grasps of the crisp and early fall.
This forest path the laughter still. Black bird, black bird,
please don't raise your call."
The imagery is so vivid right here its outstanding. Its almost like a old mans tale that little kids would be scared of.

"This familiar worn path in these familiar woods
it's a place I don't recall.
My path is weary and confused,
my mind feeble and flawed.
black bird, black bird. caw. caw. caw."
This ending went so well and brought it all together, the poem was dark and I loved how you made the reader feel in this.

I love the title. I love how you made it so descriptive , felt like I was actually there while reading it. I love how it's a dark poem. therefor I think the poem is very good :)