Your reworded my ideas and made them way better.
I love this poem. Thank you for sharing it with me and for taking your time.
5/5

This is something different..where a poet
seeks inspiration but you have worded it very beautifully with a medieval taste to it..nicely written :)

Now idk ,hw the reader wil approach this one.
Sm may go fr rock, sm may be person ,bt i thot it as a hrt..
Its abt hrt..sad and alone, dry and rough ,waiting and praying to god for cloudburst(a sudden hapines),
Thunderstorm(excitement)..or a bucket of rain water(shed tears)..to ease the pain..
to flow in the race of or valley of love ..means to beat once agn,
Or to run like nvr before,Fast and furious, like a gazelle..on d land of unlimited imagination..
Amazing piece of work..

I love it:) great job a 5/5:)

Oh that's right I rated it or just read it but never left a comment,,,I love love loved it it's amazing and greatly worded and written,,,a fantastic wonderful peice,, great work you two :) 5/5

I pray for a cloudburst, a thunderstorm
Buckets of rain water to open the gates
and flood this dry gorge with thoughts and imagination galore
Create a mighty flood to move that rock
and flood my dry valley of thoughts with inspiration.

wow this is amazing, the emotions of this poem are trully powerfull and the words put together all flow really well

Edited: Lol im sorry wrong copy and paste

This poem is so well written. An excellent job and a simply beautiful write 5/5

A very nice write, wording was excellent with a gentle flow.

Connie