I take this knife
by Crys Nov 8, 2011
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For you thought you could break my heart for what its worth. Now you lay on this bead your arms bound to the edge. As I take this knife and plunge it in.I take my love I take my soul I take every heart that you have stole. I take this knife and slit your throat blood rushes down as I laugh. For ive gave you love and i shall taketh away. Tell me now that you love me for words you cannot say.I take my knife and take your life like you did mine. Ohh I take this knife I take this knife and take back every part of me you have. So lay in bead my dead love for i have taken all that you are and threw it away. |
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12 years ago
Your words are powerful and provoke powerful imagery. It is'nt very structured and could use revision. Sometimes it feels as if you will lose the spontaniaty if you pour over your work but remember you are telling a story.
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12 years ago
Your words are powerful and provoke powerful imagery. It is'nt very structured and could use revision. Sometimes it feels as if you will lose the spontaniaty if you pour over your work but remember you are telling a story.
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12 years ago
Your words are powerful and provoke powerful imagery. It is'nt very structured and could use revision. Sometimes it feels as if you will lose the spontaniaty if you pour over your work but remember you are telling a story.
