IF this is about a friend... then I envy him/her :p lol

You really defined your love for him/her.. so smoothly and in a vivid way ;)

This poem is so touching and your friend is lucky to have you. You really spilled your feelings out here and you can tell you love your friend dearly. I love how you took all the elements of friendship and love and poured them into a poem

5/5

A love of this magnitude is beyond what most of us ever feel or expect to find. You penned a touching wonderful poem that filled the heart of your friend so completely it will forever stay strong and vivid
He or she is very lucky indeed

Realy really so so so lucky he is to have u..

Very caring thoughts for a friend? I presume. Without the care and love from our friends, the soul sometimes dies, though the heart may be alive and beating.

Interesting piece. I'll start by saying that there were parts that didn't flow well but that didn't matter because your emotions were clearer than water.