Wow amazing I loved it everything was great and wonderfully said and written,,fantastic wording that just pushes the poem beyond greatness,,,I loved every bit and felt it was me,,,a delightful read and the reader can't help but love this poem
Nice job,,,excellent job amazing :) 5/5

I love it!! Good job :) Everything just flowed together and I could feel it as if I was there. Amazing. 5/5

Its very good I like the rhyming and the emotion put into it I like alot:):): nice job