Vid Reaction

by craig   Jun 24, 2004


Wisconsin girl, Wisconsin girl,
whose grace as rare as apple pearl,
how can you be so trippy true?
what have I done to virtue you?

your voice as like a thousand bells,
that chimes and sings angelic knells,
when whispers `schnookie` in my ear,
brings forth my hearts resistance tears.

how can i fight such potent tunes?
i smile, i sway, `oh fine`, i swoon,
become a child, no more a man,
a helpless plaything in your hand.

how come this voice effects me so?
i try to answer, alas don't know,
i snap into the foetal position,
unable to conjour opposition.

whats come of me? where did i go?
i vex to hide but it does show,
I\'m lost in her, her womanly guiles,
for her id crawl a crooked mile.

this bewitchment i cannot understand,
even swap my home for another land,
i cannot forebear what is to come,
i give up, concede, submit, succumb.

another quickie `bouncy` one ;) for my baybee waybee xxx

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  • 19 years ago

    by Michelle

    read this the other night honey, but love seeing it again..it's brilliant as are all of yours..oh I love you soo sooo much..don't know what to say about your poems anymore, I just love every last line but not as much as I adore you...(lovefest!!!!) Can't wait to speak to you tonight and tell you that some more...ONE WEEK BABE!!!! (OMG!!!!!!) kisses, cuddles, LOVE...Mich