I had a hard time figuring it out but i did..ur imagery is good.

Ooh. I liked this one a lot. I can relate to this one. Your words are beautiful. :) You need to write more!
5/5

"play with fire and you'll get burn".

A really good saying that many people have told me.

I see what you mean by your poem. Its good. keep it up.

Fyi if the flow if off at all its because their song lyrics.

Before the darkness claims my sleep. To wonder aimlesly upon burning sands of a desert street. you becoming an uncontrolable yearning !

So much craving in this poem... it's great!