Comments : Our Love is all about

  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Awesome poem, hun. I'm happy to hear that you're so happy. :D
    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    I love this! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    What I love about this poem is the simple romance!

    You can have the best time with the person you love just by being lying in their arms and enjoying each other's company. Love is amazing no matter where you are or what you're doing with your partner

    Wrapped in your arms,
    listening to your heartbeat,
    feeling the warmth of your body,
    looking up into your eyes,
    whispering i love you,
    knowing this moment will last forever.

    Laying on you in the bed,
    giving you a kiss on the nose,
    running my fingers through your hair,
    nuzzling my head into your chest,
    being the happiest I've ever been.
    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

    I love these two stanzas. I think it's the most romantic part of the poem. It shows that two people are really in love and are so happy in each other's company.

    Well written. I had a feeling of "AWwww" as I was reading it. I think of the times I nestle my head in my husband's chest and fall asleep. The best feeling int he world.

    x well done babe

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    Awwww this poem is gorgeous! it makes me think of my boyfriend. This is a lovely poem that is soft and relateable.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Aww this is so adorable!! i love it so much

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Beautiful...!!
    A poem which showcases the warmth of love to the core and depicts what love is all about...!!
    I too feel that love is about a small world of understanding,sweet memories we share and a bond we make and where only the two-in-love-couple reside and spend the entire life entangled with the kiss of love....:))

    Wrapped in your arms,
    listening to your heartbeat,
    feeling the warmth of your body,
    looking up into your eyes,
    whispering i love you,
    knowing this moment will last forever.

    ^^

    what a verse..!!
    I enjoyed reading each word of it and I just got clinged to this verse as it put forth a beautiful visual of a beautiful couple immensely in love....<3

    The verse is so beautiful and depicts how for some individuals,life is all about being for each other and feeling each touch of love....

    Well done...
    Good work...:))