I love this part
~How about if I used my last breath to tell you,
by whispering it into your ear so calmly?~

you are so talented 100/100

If you would have listened to me from the start,
I wouldn't be lying dead on this pale tile floor.
Will you listen to me now; will you read all of it,
all the words I thought, but you never let me say?
-A strong ending :). Saying will you listen to me now that i'm no longer here.

I love this. Wanting, needing him to reach out, & him never till its way to late. Perfect emotion :)

Flawless<3
5/5