Amazing(:. Love this girl.

Portraying yourself as someone to the world, bcuz you don't want them to see the weak part of you. & all you want is love in the end.

Great Job, so many people can relate it to<3
5/5

Jessi, you really have transferred the pain from your eyes into the readers' eyes. Great job with the emotions. so much rawness and flawlessness.

I guess i am just 'used', not 'use' to crying...
I am so 'used', not 'use' to being the girl everyone sees..
Just my suggestions..
Here, you provide another great piece that has nice wording and emotions one can grasp..the ending was terrific, having hope that one day, pipo will indeed see you through everything and see the real you...

I guess i am just 'used', not 'use' to crying...
I am so 'used', not 'use' to being the girl everyone sees..
Just my suggestions..
Here, you provide another great piece that has nice wording and emotions one can grasp..the ending was terrific, having hope that one day, pipo will indeed see you through everything and see the real you...

Some people can't see past a front either because they can't see past their own problems or because they are scared too look to deeper at the ones they love. Your poem really speaks to the heart of the reader and gets them emotional

5/5

This is wonderful piece and the audience can feel your pain very much and its really strong. Excellent job. 5/5

This is really good and really relatable