Excellent piece. I am now a fan of your work. There is so so much emotion in this piece and it is amazing.

The emotion in this is something I can really relate to at the moment. It is strong and excellent. Beautifully written. :)

Well, well

seems like this piece ties down with your other two pieces.
The cat is dead and the jagged street.

Breakups can be tough but it depends on how the person takes them. Its usually, melancholy the one that comes to the surface but later on we start to come to the grey color.

Also Knowing that the love was dead doesn't mean that it won't hurt. It can be dead for one party but for the other may still be alive. So I understand why it can hurt so bad. It can hurt both even if there is only one that still loves.

Well written poem.

Your work is fab....!!
Emotions are well brought out and your poem seems to be a bit mature with the wordings used...
bottomline:A good piece...:)

I can confirm that the fragments of wisdom of this well written poem will be something a will ponder for days

But only now in tears
do I feel my fears. > my two fav lines

LOVED IT!!! xx

Very shallow easy to understand. go deeper and more into the meaning of life use insight not intellect mattias from christopher

It's good. Interesting in a good way!
Good job I do like this piece.
~Kitty