Comments : Foods of Love

  • 12 years ago

    by Amreen

    Good poem buddy...!
    I liked the way you compared love with food and your poem has the flavours of food blended with the intensity of love and you have good potential...

    I am your only chocolate, the only one to fit the mold
    I either can be served hot, or else you can have me cold
    Little candy, you have been the one I am craving to hold
    Please tell me what to do in order to melt your heart of gold

    ^
    My favorite verse...:)

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    I like your choice of words. The sentences fit together well and the rhyimngs you use r wonderful. The last stanza about the chocolate was my favourite. great job..a 5 from me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is so good, the words kept me wanting to read more, i love it!