This is wonderful Paul....

Alex

Wow. very impressive

Wow so much has already been said. I love this piece and you have done a fabulous job writing it. 5/5 from me.

I really like this :)

This is really good great job keep writing :)

Everything have been said:)
Great work I love it, ofc a 5/5

This is a very deep and emtoional poem

something that I am sure that people wonder about as well, I do like the flow of it...

the wondering of it... will they let me in

I loved that ending.... its a powerful thought, one that can be pondered all day at times

Not the best I've read, but definitely not bad!
It didn't flow very well for me, but the content was meaningful.
Well done.

This write leaves the reader with deep thoughts and about one's life, how one has been living it all this while. Nicely penned leaving some good questions to think about..liked it!

Soo good, and touching! keep it up Paul!

"To reach for the sky,
was my motto
Yet wings, i had none"

I totally can relate this stanza to a lot of my friends and people here!! It happens a lot. I think this poem has a good meaning in it and a good morale as well.

Loved The Ending Really Emotional && Deep xx

Your poems are very detailed and brilliant. Where and how do you think of them cos I find it very difficult to write something like this xxx

Excellent

Deep, profound, epic. All made so by the last stanza. It made me love this poem.

... and yes... they will let you in.