Comments : Cruel Intentions

  • 8 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow, this poem is amazing... it was a bit different than your usual poems, and I love the title. It caught my eye! I love how you wrote about this person leaving their scent behind, and how you would star in the "abandoned" play. It was penned beautifully.

    Great job sweetie :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Decayed

    I really love the typical sincerity in your writes. Awesome, gIrl ;)

  • 8 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Every poem you write is that much more amazing :)

    I knew a day would come where the
    title "abandoned" would create the
    perfect play for me to start in, but
    I never knew that you'd direct every
    scene in it.
    - Love this. It came unexpected that he would do you the way he did. That all the pain and hurt you feel he caused.

    All the pain and hurt you feel you can feel as you're reading it. You can see him holding onto you tight & you being surprised as you see hes the director. Flawless<3


  • 8 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    A wonderful flow with deep emotional touches. We go into relationships blind, guided by someone we are attracted too or sometimes even family . Being abandoned comes in many forms.
    Excellent write

  • 8 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    Very nice, relateable and short. 4/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Just an opinion...

    Did you mean "would create the perfect play for me to STAR in?" The word 'start' makes sense there too, I was just curious.

    A poem that all of us can relate to...we have all been led in the wrong direction by love at some point.

  • 8 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This poem has great free flow and reads like an eloquent entry to a journal