Wow, this poem is amazing... it was a bit different than your usual poems, and I love the title. It caught my eye! I love how you wrote about this person leaving their scent behind, and how you would star in the "abandoned" play. It was penned beautifully.
Great job sweetie :)
8 years ago
I really love the typical sincerity in your writes. Awesome, gIrl ;)
I knew a day would come where the
title "abandoned" would create the
perfect play for me to start in, but
I never knew that you'd direct every
scene in it.
- Love this. It came unexpected that he would do you the way he did. That all the pain and hurt you feel he caused.
All the pain and hurt you feel you can feel as you're reading it. You can see him holding onto you tight & you being surprised as you see hes the director. Flawless<3