Through my eyes...
I saw you
a simple perfection,
your innocence
a lamb with no blemish.

Superb introduction you have here. You see her in so many ways. shes is a true art of the creator himself and she is pure. Loved how you compare her to a lamb since lamb are considered to be pure animals.

through my eyes...
I saw
in your eyes
what the future beheld;
forth for us,
prosperity to posterity
streaming from the undying love
that I breathed into you
and you breathed back into me,
the kiss of life.

Now you see her through your eyes. You see the future that you too will have. Loved how you tell her your love will prosper, its good to have a positive attitude in a relationship. She gave you the kiss of life, like she is everything you need, without her, you simply are dead

through my eyes...
my heart warmed towards you
then;
it beat its' fastest
then faster
then slowly
then gently
it had found love.

You got accustomed to her slowly. Love takes time to mature and you have expressed it well in your own words in this piece. You conclude it beautifully. 5/5