I voted excellent! i love it!

There is so much description and such a fantastic word choice, my gosh this piece is good. There is an established tone that tells a story of its own, and your voice seems to shine through here and the love is felt by all. Its an excellent write 5/5

No wORDS.....Juss Awesome !!
Apericiated !!

Dude this was just AMAZING! I liked the feel of it and the descrition