Darkness surronds my bed whispering in my ear saying I wish you were dead,
I'm sure you caught this already just haven't had the time to go back and edit. Surrounds.
Alright enough of being a Nazi!
You definitely have a rhyming way to your poems and it makes them enjoyable.
Suicide poems, or self-hurt poems are always hard to comment on, for me atleast.
Always gotta remember to keep your head up.
Band-aids are better than razors in my experience.
I try to fight off the demons of my past but to no avail,
They always do the same things that cause me to fail,
Torturing my mind, saying no one loves me,
^^^ these three lines make it for me atleast.