I am stripped from each
inch of sanity, tripping from

^ You are a madwoman<3 a mad-madwoman. This single idea made me flashback to Edgar Allan Poe's, The Tell-Tale Heart, where madness was leaking from the voice of the speaker.

tripping from
one ashtray into another,

^ mmmm.. interesting!! You're being burned?

I try to measure the miles
that I will possibly choke with
right before he sniffs me out
with my stumbling mind.

^ You are... a cigarette? But where are you, in a psychiatric office?

For I have always been a wearied
smoldering cigarette,
he guides deep breaths in-
I burn to ashes.

^ Okaaaaaaaaaayyy.. Now I got half the view. When he breathes, you are burned.

But today, I may need a
psychologist to help me seize
the ladder back,
back, yet not to the cave
between his lips, nope nor
to his pocket.

^ I don't know what's the exact notion behind the 'psychology' theme... Care to answer? What's 'ladder' ?? eh eh shu? :p

Rather than that, I tremendously enjoyed the smokey atmosphere you have painted. It has anxiety all over, and the tension built is marvelously penned! I love this

I am stripped from each
inch of sanity, tripping from
one ashtray into another,
I try to measure the miles
that I will possibly choke with
right before he sniffs me out
with my stumbling mind.
^^
already started me wondering on where are you going with this piece ... !

For I have always been a wearied
smoldering cigarette,
he guides deep breaths in-
I burn to ashes.
^^
you and cigs nana, but tthe way you describeb yourself here, OMG genius :)

But today, I may need a
psychologist to help me seize
the ladder back,
back, yet not to the cave
between his lips, nope nor
to his pocket.
^^
Now I am curious, then where?! What is it that you are looking for?

Got it that this is really peraonal to you, but then I loved it too :)

God bless you sweetie ..

The poem here is well written and I love the imagery that you have noted!

I try to measure the miles
that I will possibly choke with
right before he sniffs me out
with my stumbling mind.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
You're describing yourself as being a ciggarette and you mentioned yourself choking - I like this as generally the person who is smoking themselves would probably be the ones choking!

Well written!

x

This is quite original though I coul not help but thinkf this old lyrics

http://youtu.be/yYQizr-cafM

I agree with the above commenter that this poem is original and I really enjoyed the read. That said though I struggled to find meaning in this piece - not because there was no meaning but because I found multipul meanings and was unsure how to take the poem. That said it isn't a bad thing I liked the fact the poem had many dimentions to it as it made the poem more complex and interesting. Once again you have held my attention with ease.

5/5