In my opinion some stanzas weren't too strong but I found the last two to be too powerful.

I will rise from the ashes
Leaving us behind
The past was cruel so the
Future has to be kind

Soon you will be just a memory
A person from the depths of my past
I've had a lucky escape this vicious
Cycle did not last

I really like this two stanzas.

Hey babe,

Well I have to say I love the title. It pulls me in and makes me want to read more. Not just that - I believe the title to be true!

The poem itself is very strong with emotion. A little story being told about two lovers who had in my mind broken up and gotten back together again (the whole vicious cycle thing)

After a while the heart is so broken and cannot be fixed - and of course he goes and tries to break it again

As sad as this poem is I do like the fact that in the end you have freed yourself from this relationship and you will be able to mend and heal

A well written poem

x

Jenna, dear
Inticing title, linked well as incorporated into the first stanza,
flow was up and down,
a few mistakes/errors if you fine tooth comb it but...
Strong ending and saddened tone throughout, good rhymes and simple artistry.

Xxx

Wow this poem is amazing. It made me tear-up.

I don' think I have heard this before:
You can't break a broken heart

A very original line carrying the emotions through well in this sad poem.