Comments : A Blissful Mess

  • 12 years ago

    by Bobby

    You don't believe in love
    but still you feel it in your heart,
    is that the very proof
    that love exists

    You feel all is lost
    but you become filled
    with joy and hope

    While being down
    and depressed,
    with all that lingers
    in your head

    You push this feeling
    deep down into your soul
    away from your heart
    away from your thoughts,
    it lingers deep down
    in a hole

    thats someone special to do one of two things climb down there and pull it out or hang out till your ready to come back up

    great poem great feeling and great vision in it :0) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This well written poen is very inspiring and I can't get enough of this kind of poetry

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Your title and poem makes me think of the saying "ignorance is bliss" - the words you express about someone not believing in love but feels it.

    A lovely poem hun

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