Holy mother of god! I wasn't expecting this, not one bit. From the moment go this poem entrances ita reader to wilfully read on to see what'll happen next.

Your use of vocabulary is outstanding, not only that but you got your flown spot on. This paints a vivid picture in it's readers mind throughout, i applaud you for this piece of art. 5/5 and favourited!

The imagery is astronomical in this intense love poem. I am impressed Your flow is in order and pulling me in.

Look at you, this is something similar to what I ve been wanting to write but my words just couldn't come thus I haven't finish it. And you did an execellent job with this piece. I'm really surprised.