It good i like it

You know what...when I study about Islam Education...we should not cry before we sleep...Satan will like that....but this is only poem and I think this is only for emotional "elaborate"....hahaha sorry...I don't know to replace that word...:)

Hahaha ok thanks

I like this. :) hmmm it seems that your having a problem huh?? :)

Yeah but am fine now <3

Short but sad...the upper half i myself have experienced so can relate to it quite well enough...as far 2nd half :) i am really happy to have him back...but seem like the one in poem is not :( ...but i liked the emotions...nice one :)

Noo he's back now :)
Thank god he's back now :)
Iam glad to know that <3
& thanks

Oh wwooww!! thats really good!! 100/100

Thanksss :)

I liked it short and sweet, really liked the ending as I felt I had to give an answer :) nice poem

If its ok with you I might do a poem just based on how I would reply to this as if I had to, thanks

Thanks & yeah its ok

Very very good writing keep up the good work

Thank you :)

Hey, feel proud u gave a chance to that heart,maybe oneday he woud realize.I hope my gf would do forgivet me...Afterall there Sustains humanities.Like ur write very much,exact emotions reflected !

Helllooo really thanks
i hope she forgive u