Awww.. this poem was so emotional and sad, but it also showed strength.. You portrayed the struggle people face with loving someone who isn't right for them, and it was very relatable. I loved how you are trying to love this person less, yet you end up loving them more.

I loved this stanza:

I searched all the conversation
we had; thinking I'd find something
to stop falling for you. I wake up
convincing myself that today I will
fall out of love with you, instead I
end up loving you more.

-- I really feel like this part is so true, and so relatable! Even if we try to convince ourselves to stop loving someone is wrong for any reason, it still doesn't convince our hearts!

Loved this poem... Great job hon!

I agree with Sarah. It was tender yet filled with melancholy and a state of bedlam. I love it.

You make love poems seem so simple and easy It flows from you like water from a falls. This had it all you left nothing out. Love is confusion, warmth, confusion ,, tenderness, confusion. Did I mention confusion :-)
Excellent write

Hello. Great poem.Sounds like your stuck in the middle,not so sure which where to turn but edging towards parting.Maybe i am wrong, i am no expert.Well done.

So I Say
PUBLISH a book with all your poems :).

I love this poem, like love it :)
Amazing. Wanting to so hard to forget him and to stop loving him. Not being able to then he pushes you away and you finally are able to start.

flawless & amazing :)
draws you in

5/5 love(:

A very sad deep poem that I can relate to with past relationships

Sometimes when you love someone so much it takes it that much longer to get over them.

It doesn't help when they give you false hope or lead you in the wrong direction

This poem is well written and shows so much emotion

Well done

x

R3ally gud po3m

It is well written and explains the emotions one would feel while trying to do what's best even if it means leaving the one you love

Very beautiful! a piece of work that so many, inlcuding I can relate too. a sad but lovely poem. your expressions are very deep, and i like how you wrote it differently, as in you didn't make it rhyme that much, i love poems like yours. i had to read it twice! 5/5

Amazing poem just remember you deserve to be happy.hang in there