The title in this poem is great.

I saw the title and thought I wonder what the craving is

After reading the poem, I felt as though the craving was desire and passion itself. What I loved was the fact that it could have a different meaning to each individual reading the poem. Each person has something they crave and I also thought of something I was craving as I was reading the words

The words are strong in this poem and really think it is one of your best!!!

Well done

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Nominated

Powerful poem indeed, more was defined in this than any other you have penned. Excellent wording, great job

Sounds like a bad case of libido ;)

I have to agree with Tangerine here. Ha ha! Looks like raging hormones set on fire.
Sensual, stormy, seductive, sexy, literotica.
Do we need to send a fire engine or find that luscious (=sweet) guy ?

Love it! 5 chocolates for that guy who can bring out so much chocolate cravings.

Wow.. this poem is amazing.. I love it! I was captivated from the start! You built this craving from beginning to end, and it was really intriguing. I was kind of hoping you would reveal what the craving was at the end, but it still is interesting that you left it a mystery.

Great job with this poem! It was a great joy to read :)

This poem is emotionally dynamic, the flow constantly keeps enchanting the reader. You chose words that's so pleasant to the ears. I admire the simplicity yet very magnificent in thoughts. Its appealing to the mind, keep up the wonderful work. KUDOS!

This poem is emotionally dynamic, the flow constantly keeps enchanting the reader. You chose words that's so pleasant to the ears. I admire the simplicity yet very magnificent in thoughts. Its appealing to the mind, keep up the wonderful work. KUDOS!