Comments : Content

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I smiled when I saw your poem total had increased :)

    What a lovely piece, a hint of sadness yet gratitude and acceptance,
    The flow was flawless, and the wording simple but the effect it had was outstanding.
    I loved the ending, such an awesome way to end, with that final acceptance, and confidence.

    Very nicely done Yaki,

    love,
    Tara
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    So apparently all my nominations are going to you this week, because you're kicking poetic ass. This is one of the best I have read from you. Such maturity, such understanding, such clarity throughout the entire message. This poem was so strong and one that I wish many girls, especially teenagers, could read and truly grasp. We're our own worst critics. I love this part:

    "simply because
    she deserved it..

    to thank her,
    for never giving up on me. "

    Just amazing. You know the kind of power this has on me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh when I read the first few stanzas I thought this poem was about two different lovers.

    As I read on the ending blew me away - it was like a final twist in a movie.

    I enjoyed this read and though this was an amazing poem.

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Yaki, this was so incredible. I was not expecting the ending and it was so delicate and beautiful....it made my heart soar. The content, the soul of that person means a lot because she never gave up on you, through everything- disagreements and just life.

    Love the strength in your poetry- really hits my heart
    MaryAnne

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow amazing I loved and enjoyed this greatly written poem :) 5/5