There is something about this poem that has brought me back to read it for a third time. Each time I found myself reading in a monologue voice and my thoughts were straying to The Lord of The Rings. I think the repetition throughout emphasises each scene for the reader and is very effective.

I felt there was a stange presence that, somehow I haven't quite pinpointed so I'm nominating this one in the hope that someone else will read it and give there thoughts. I enjoyed this one and...I'm sure I'll come back for another read at it.

I like this one too

Very much enjoyed. Thank you.

This is deep............must read it again to digest its depth :)

I thought this was an amazing poem. You done a great job of using imagery here. Loved how you used the terms "rain turning to ice running through chilled hands." really captured the poem altogether. Nice write. :)