Just ok n straight to d point. But, I guess...she's yet to be herself thru her Silence.. Understand d@ Severity moulds a tough mind..but, Forgiveness is peaceful vengeance. Tame d Past n Name ur Future.. Nicely done, 5pts!

I would suggest some commas here and there to keep the flow even better..its good..it seems to tell a story of a troubled girl. Its simple, yet sad but conveys something big.

Aww I cried threw diss one

Babii it's amazing..ur amazing lol

100/100

Oh my goodness! Great poem! :)