I love the feel of this poem. It's a different feel than your other poems, this has a bit of sadness but content also.. it's kind of hard to explain the tone I felt.

I love your first stanza and how well crafted it was packed with great imagery. Love that first line about the lonely force, I thought that was really interesting! :)

The ending of this piece,

the ending of this piece...It has my heart.

wow.

I think u r a genious..js awesum..fp