Well.., Uncertainty defined crowns neck!

This is truly a beautiful poem. It carries so much weight, sadness and happiness lingers on the lips. This is heartfelt and very deep. I loved the flow and the vocabulary you chose. You used less then common words in certain areas which to me made the read a bit more intriguing.

Overall Job very well done!

Thanks very much for the positive feedback. Its very inspiring, I welcome anything you can throw at me I would really like to improve my poetry as some stuff I've read on this site has really blown my mind! Amazing, almost as if its hypnotised me and lead me into another world.

As I look back at some of the poems I write I improve certain parts slightly because since I joined this site ideas won't stop bouncing on the attention strings in my mind like a kid on a trampoline who won't stop until they get your attention...."Look daddy,...look"!

So when I write something I need to get it finished and up on this site otherwise I can't rest my thoughts. Hence slight improvements to the poem with time.

Does anyone else have this issue??

Poetry has been my best discovery for many moons! =)

A lot of thought went into this not to mention such a skillful delivery