Wow girl so much it just hits my heart filled with knowledge wisdom truth love hurt I felt everything and kinda wanted to cry,,amazing and so brave u are an how u share,,5/5 I love ur writings and big hugs

A lot of emotion expressed... good write 5/5

Awww... Holly this poem is filled with heartbreak, longing, and nostalgia.. It was sweet but sad at the same time... I think we all can relate to the feelings you expressed, there something about a first love...

I loved this part:
"as I hear you smile through the phone you say I love you too"
>>> I love the idea of hearing someone's smile through the phone. This part just blew me away.

Great job hon!

A typical should I or shouldn't I situation. Feeling seem in a tornado of emotions. Well penned

Another amazing poem by you, Holly. I'm sorry that I haven't been around and that you're so confused, dear. Written penned.

5/5

-Heather

Awww.....really sad one, must say..could actually feel your pain that's all to say...:(

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Wow...this is really sad I can feel ur pain Hun..

Of course...5/5 from me

Well done..ur amazing :)