Wow! Meme this poem is amazing... I love it! The title caught my eye, and I love how you wrote this...

My favorite line in the whole poem:

"You stole all of my warm summers,
only to trade me with your cold;
lifeless winters."
>> amaaaazing! It has so much meaning, and this should be added to your quotes! LOVE IT!

The ending was really powerful... I like how you're weak but still strong throughout this poem... how you realize this person is arrogant and not worth all of your seasons...

Great job hon!

This is priceless

The warm cold winter summer metaphors in this analogy is on spot

Wow
powerful
hahah, very powerful, you speak with a defiant voice like you're ready to conquer the world and suffer the consequences
i like that, it was very daring
especially the opening lines
you're writing wonders as of late, Keep doin it

I like your tone, too.. It's like so rebellious, and the ending is so smart.

I read this earlier but wasn't able to comment, but here I am and by golly will I comment :)

I dare you to look me in the eye
and tell me that you have again
fallen for someone; that is not
me. Do you have what it takes
to do it? I doubt it.

^I loved the confident opening, and the way you said "I dare you" and "I doubt it", such fire in your words here

I awaited for all your seasons to
pass, standing out there holding
my favorite one to share it with you.
Then every year you just drift away
without making a stop.

^Life passes us by and sometimes people do too, I am amazed at this stanza because it seemed to lack flow the first time and then when I re-read it, I was blown away with the smoothness, I just needed a second read I reckon :)

I cant believe how arrogant you are,
cant you see what you have done?
You stole all of my warm summers,
only to trade me with your cold;
lifeless winters.

^I guess Summer is your favourite season? I loved that last line so damn much Meme, you just knew exactly when to add a line like that!

Soon a day will come when you
realize that you have stolen all of
my seasons while I offered to
share all mine with you, but then
you'll be too many seasons too late.

^I love that, who gives a damn attitude here, and throughout, it was such a tone of strength, it made me smile,

What else can I say, you just wrote an amazingly flawless piece here :)

Flawless, powerful and brilliant. I'm not good at taking a poem apart and giving all the whys and why not's
But this one has no why not's it's perfect.

Awesome. Brilliant

I dare you to look me in the eye
and tell me that you have again
fallen for someone; that is not
me. Do you have what it takes
to do it? I doubt it
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
What an opening of a poem. So much emotions expressed in the first stanza alone. To say that this person seems to want to be with everyone but the one who seems to love him dearly.

The second and third stanza says so much. Tells us really what you have gone through with this person. How he made you feel and how long you have wanted to be with them for.

The last stanza I think is wonderful too. An awesome ending. It's like a way for you to get your closure to say that there is a point where you wont be waiting for him. There is a time where he won't get his chance.

Very powerful poem.

x

That is an amazing piece one of the best ive read so far

Amazing, just amazing! It was so sad but so deep! I loved it! :) Good work my friend!

Beautifully written and powerfully penned; it had this really "you actually think you can do this to me" tone to the whole poem and I love it.

5/5

-Heather

Its beautiful and makes me wanna cry
-Angel