Comments : Glistening Metal

  • 12 years ago

    by mikaylar

    This poem speeks to me... truly. its like a waterfall. it flows. it has this sort of beauty surrounding it as well as the pain that makes you realize things youve never realized before.
    truly inspirational.

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    Beautiful, just beautiful. This is creativity. The way you express your feeling, how you have chosen your words and placed them, brilliance. I was really taken aback by the passion and the erotica you put into this, how you relate cutting yourself to the pleasures of having sex, i havent seen anything like it. This is on my fav list from now on. Great work

  • 12 years ago

    by Whispy.Gypsy

    Wow i love it i can visualize every moment 5/5