Comments : A Message; Without the Poem

  • 8 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Wow wow wow thats strong, I love this poem:)
    5/5

  • 8 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love your tone in this,
    Its so true as well because so many things are hidden and misconceptions and flase pretences shown,

    It was such a strong message and the title is eye-catching and intriguing

    love you girl

    mwah
    xxxx

  • 8 years ago

    by Lioness

    Oh this poem is so true hun!!!

    I think the cheating thing comes to my mind again. I feel the words are your way of saying that you are hurt but you are finding the closure and are moving on.

    I know you may not say that itself but the strength of the poem and powerfulness of the poem speaks for itself.

    The poem is quite sad but the words show us how strong you are.

    Awesome babe

    x

  • 8 years ago

    by Boy

    I always love sad poems. the title caught my attention. the very first stanza was my favorite. so straight forward. and full of sorrows. because its the condition when someone really in deep sorrows. good work.. i understand the poetry in my own world.... that what i found in it... :)

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Just because I don't speak,
    it doesn't mean; I don't know.
    And just because I never blame,
    doesn't mean I am not hurt.

    Title justfies your work & though this is much of a release but at the same time, it holds a very strong message. Really liked it.

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Just because I don't speak,
    it doesn't mean; I don't know.
    And just because I never blame,
    doesn't mean I am not hurt.

    i loved this stanza the the whole of it is amazingly written.... :) like it

  • 8 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    I love how the title says "without" the poem, yet it reads very "poem-like" (okay,I made that word) this is so raw and true,and although it does not contain metaphor the writer did a great job getting her point across in a brutally honest, .. yet beautiful way.
    I was hooked,and I just kept re-reading because write such as these are just so relatable, it gives you that sense of assurance that you're not alone in the world that some people feel the same way you do towards certain things.. I also loved the "oh,no you don't" in the
    ending it gave it more power. sometimes, you just want to read something refreshing, something that impacts the mind yet does not confuse it..AND THIS WAS IT.
    I love,I love,I love