Secrets in my head.
Here to remind me of what was said.
A story told tehn twistd around.
Making me feel like the clown.
It was a mistake ,
not wehat it may seem.
Just a dream turned into reality.

You write a very good poem here. In the third line, it should be 'A story told and then twisted around'

and in the sixth line, it should be 'Not what it may seem'.

those are some of the mistakes i observed. Overall, a well written poem that had my attention from the beginning to the end with its good flow.

Another strong poem that really grips you from start to end. I liked the length of the poem as sometimes it can be hard to give feeling to shorter poems yet you managed to give this piece an edge and some balls

once again excellent

5/5